" Tim has helped sharpen many of my scripts by pinpointing what needs work and providing specific fixes for the rewrite. He has the gift of finding the emotional essence of a story even if it is hidden under pages of first draft bloat. Highly recommend."

- Shawn Boxe - Writer, Silicon Valley (HBO)

"As a finalist of one of the LRLA competitions, I received free feedback from Tim. I revised my screenplay accordingly and ended up winning the Portland Comedy Film Festival Short Screenplay Competition! I cannot speak more highly of Tim's feedback, and the LRLA experience."

- Ali McGrath - Writer

Script Coaching:

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Testimonials:

"Tim has a keen eye for spotting vulnerabilities in story, pacing, and structure. His feedback on several of my scripts has been invaluable. I highly recommend his services for those that are serious about taking their work to the next level."
- Lloyd Gilyard Jr. - Writer, The Good Doctor (ABC)

Literally some of the best feedback I've received over the course of about a dozen screenplays.

- Ivo Raza - Writer/Director

“In LA, I met with Tim for an hour feedback on my feature film script and since then, I have requested help via email since I’m now back in Australia. Helpful is an understatement. He really took the time to explain to me his thoughts, and how I can adjust or fix issues within my script. I really appreciated how open he was when we had different opinions on something. He’s open to compromising and is so respectful of a writers hard work, however when he thinks that something crucial needs to be changed, he will give you specific examples and reasons as to why. This helped my script, and myself as a writer. His positive reinforcement also helped me move forward confidently. He is intuitive, talented and a respectful script writing mentor.

- Cleo Massey

" Tim’s notes cut to the heart of a matter and truly help in developing a well-rounded character and world. I absolutely value his opinion and honesty." - Ubah Mohammed - Writer, DC’s Legends of Tomorrow (CW), The Whispers (ABC)

"My screenplay has been a finalist in several competitions, but hasn't broken through. I placed my script in good hands for feedback. Tim's positive comments concurred with the good things others had noticed. More important, he provided logical explanations of the weaknesses, and constructive directions for revisions. I feel confident now about polishing the screenplay to take it to the next level."
- Bear Kosik

" A writer isn't so much a writer as they are a rewriter. That rewrite process begins with the notes. I'm happy to report that I've been on the receiving end of Tim's notes on numerous occasions. He has an innate ability to zero in on a script's strengths and weaknesses. But he doesn't just point out what's wrong. Tim also has solutions for fixes. That is extremely valuable for any rewrite process. As a writer himself, Tim understands the process and is very empathetic to the journey a writer takes from fade in to fade out. Every script can improve with targeted notes and that's what Tim always delivers." - Rick Bitzelberger - Creative Director, Informant Media

" Tim has one of the best story senses of anyone I know. He can always be counted on to locate whatever problem exists in a script and then, make a great suggestion on how to fix it. He has a no-nonsense, analytical understanding of story and character, which is very rare. Everything I write, I always run by him." - Gregg Ostrin - Screenwriter, TV writer, Playwright